[Personal Branding]找NN看Profile

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardid=13&id=313685&star=1#2838429
Q:
麻烦各位NN帮我把脉，并推荐合适的学校。先谢谢各位了！
GMAT 720 AWA 6.0 V36 (80%) M50 (95%) (De fracto 鸡肋, I wonder whether 720/6.0 is enough for TOP 10 MBA?)
TOEFL iBT 111
Bachelor (2002) of EE, Shanghai Jiaotong Univ, GPA 3.7
Master (2005) of EE, Shanghai Jiaotong Univ, GPA 4.0
3.5 year Application Engineer W/E in semiconductor industry, Fortune 500 American firm. Have published articles in trade journals and led customer projects to successful production
Extracurriculum: lead team to win electronic design contest, photograph (how would photograph serve a strength in my application?), also consider social volunteer work this year
The reason for MBA education is a switch of career -- by working as an application engineer, I've gained much experience in world wide collaboration and leading customer's project to mass production. At the same time, a great interest and enthusiam for business development and general management deeply root and burgeon. Without a well-rounded knowledge base and management experience, I find myself somewhat reaching a bottleneck for my career advancement.
As my interest in MBA education is general management, international business, and consulting, I'd sincerely appreciate anyone evaluate my profile and suggest b-schools. I am currently considering TOP 20, preferably TOP 10 if my profile looks competitive enough.
Thanks a million!

A:
quite conservitive about top 10
it's absolutely great to show your enthusiasm
but business development is too broad
you need to go at least 2 to 3 levels down to explain the details
general management is good but the same situation
and general management comflicts somewhat with consulting
also what exactly "a well-rounded knowledge base and management experience" is?
and what specific courses you need to take and why
you'll have to explain these details to get into those tops.